We didn’t need to do any hard figuring to see if we were compatible. The harder part is that time is often not compatible. Although, I liked acting my age with you. Our ages. Younger and stupid. Or older and stupider. Like when my grandpa lost his white rooster. He was asking people to please let him know if they’d seen him. People would say, What does he look like? And my grandpa would say, Well, it’s like I just told you: he’s a white rooster. On the older side. It’s not like they were looking at each other all the time.
That’s how it was when we first met, I think. Just knowing what the air around feels like. Really close to our skin and buzzing in a quiet frenzy. But I didn’t even know what your teeth looked like all in a row. I couldn’t conjure that image.
And then we were really lost. Like both of us stood up from inside ourselves and wandered away and went swimming or something. Of course I wanted to search for our real selves, so we could come back together again. But I didn’t want to use force.
If you’ve seen two people wandering off and swimming or something pleasant, and glowing like magic air or like a summer moon, would you please let me know?
Well, what do they look like?
One walks alongside a red bicycle. Neither of them are a white rooster. I felt like my grandpa. Just missing our discrete time together.
Being lost doesn’t always feel good, especially when you can remember what life was like before. My mind got kaleidoscopic with memories. All the time that went by was spent like chewing crayons, the days slow and waxy, one-by-one. Sickening revolutions and grinding mastications. Swallowing; spending a lot of time thinking about you.
You used to live closeby. And you worked right by my house, and I always hoped and imagined we would see each other, but that kind of stuff never happens. And anyway, if that did happen, it would probably be on a day when I looked my worst, my teeth all stained with colors and my hair white and frantic like a bird’s. And you’d probably be looking your best, all your freckles earthy and flickering. This isn’t fun anymore.
I think I’m starving. I think I’m cold and tired. I think I need to sink into a fresh water spring and let things pick at me until I’m gone. Erode and turn into many little stones. Put up a sign that says, Free River Rock: take as much as you need. And hope that you would need me.
This blog post was very inspiring to me because it reminded me of my great-grandfather. I chose Leo Kouklanakis’ blog post “The White Rooster” because the author explores the theme of the passage of time and the loss of connection in his article. The overall theme of the blog describes how things once familiar and treasured become elusive with the passage of time. It made me feel emotional and reminded me of my own experience of loss and the fact that life is short.
The imagery of the white rooster is seen as a symbol of good fortune in traditional Chinese culture. It is believed that the white rooster is capable of dispelling evil spirits, driving away diseases and bringing good luck. During the Chinese New Year, white roosters are used to worship ancestors to bring good luck.
“All the time that went by was spent like chewing crayons, the days slow and waxy, one-by-one. ” This quote stands out to me the most because the author conveys that the monotony and discomfort of the past is as hard to chew on as crayons. It made me feel the monotony of my great-grandfather’s daily routine and the discomfort that slowly ended his short life.
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Hi Luowen!
Thank you so much for your comment. I love that you used the word “elusive” to describe what time does to things and to people. And also I really connected to the word “treasure.” I feel like this piece is full of things like treasure, objects and memories and images that are special. Thank you also for giving me the context of the white rooster in Chinese culture. That adds an entire layer of meaning to the piece that resonates with me, although it was purely coincidental.
That line you chose is also one of my favorites. I think it stands out from the rest. Thank you again for your comments and interpretation, and the personal aspect of your great-grandfather’s life. Really a pleasure to read your thoughts.
Leo
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