First there is the tensing. He holds himself like a breath, like a bowstring, needle just over a record.
Before the clock there was the sundial, the hourglass; the timepiece inside him is older still. I read once that animals can sense an oncoming storm. In lieu of natural disasters, he’s tuned into the dinner bell. The sharp pellet sounds of dry kibble on metal could be china set tremor-rattling in the cabinet, in a fashion, but he knows it’s coming before it comes. Setting up pieces on the chessboard just to knock the table over.
He could camp beside the autofeeder, close the remaining gap between himself and his fancied prey, but he plays coy every time. He comes by it honest, he’s just like me, he’s afraid to be seen wanting. Instead he’ll wander downstairs, insouciant, casual stagger to the window as though to set his watch. Disinterested little moue of a mouth, little mew out his mouth, and when the hour ticks over, he takes off like a thousand and one cliches, rocket bullet rumour bat out of hell, my little zero to sixty scoundrel zooming up the stairs.
I watch him set upon his bowl, triumphant gnashing flicking tail and purring all the while, and ache; I’ve never enjoyed anything so much.
Hello there, I really like your blog post! It really speaks to me because it made me think of my old pet cat. He would always be excited for dinner and would always know exactly what time it is to start eating. He was my own personal, meowing, hairball coughing, and occasionally lazy alarm clock. Never late and always on time, until he realized that if he started meowing for me earlier then he could get food earlier. I stopped checking my own clock when he learned the time, but I had to start checking again as he started calling for food 3 hours early.
Reading your blog post really made me feel nostalgic because I haven’t seen my cat in 3 years. I remember all the fun we used to have together. Along with all the times he would sleep in the most random of places. From the top of my refrigerator to the toilet. While reading the post, I really liked the line you put about the sundial and hourglass. My reaction was that of intrigue, since I would never think of something like that normally looking at a clock, I would just focus on the hour and minute hands of the clock.
The last line, “I watch him set upon his bowl, triumphant gnashing flicking tail and purring all the while, and ache; I’ve never enjoyed anything so much” stands out to me the most because that’s how I feel when I feed my cat. The feeling of contempt and happiness when watching my cat eat along with his weird eating habits. I also liked your choice of using “moue” because it is unique and it made me search up the definition. The imagery about the sound of kibble in China was very nice as well. I do like the comparison to china rattling in a cabinet. This helps me get a very clear picture in my head.
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Hi Cheng,
Thank you so much for your comment on my piece. I’m glad that this was able to speak to you, and I loved reading about your own cat. Being able to connect over the shared idosyncracies of owning a pet is one of my favourite parts of the experience, and it sounds like he was a clever and tricky little guy.
I also really appreciate your thoughts on which parts of the piece worked for you on a more technical level! I wasn’t completely sure if moue would translate well to readers, since it’s a loan word that doesn’t get used super often in modern settings, so knowing that you enjoyed the experience of learning it makes me feel more confident about its inclusion. 🙂
-Damien
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