inspired by Joe Brainard’s “I remember”
I remember the sound of Ma’s hair dryer. I remember the singe of the hot comb the night before Easter Sunday. I remember Blue Magic and Pink hair spray, olive oil, and Palmer’s hair food. I remember Phoebe wiping the grease off my forehead when Mom was done braiding to prevent me from getting pimples. I remember the light tap of the flattening iron. I remember the sound of knuckles cracking and the deep breath she took when she was halfway through (It had been three hours). I remember begging to look like the girls in school and crying when my hair didn’t fall to my shoulders, even after six hours in Phoebe’s computer chair. I remember the music she used to play – the ChiLites, the Chantels, the Ronettes, The Jacksons. I remember her humming along. I remember the light hiss the clothing iron used to make when she was getting my outfits ready. I remember the sound of cabinets closing. I remember the shower water running. I remember Courtney playing Backstabber every morning. I remember her hugs. I remember the sound of Aaron’s iTunes library. I remember Gang Starr, Ghostface Killah, A Tribe Called Quest, Kendrick and Commissioned. I remember sneaking into his room and sitting with him as he downloaded new music.
I remember Alvin Slaughter playing on Sunday mornings. I remember the sound of something tearing and the horror I felt when I realized it was my stockings – the nice ones with the flowers on them. I remember the clacking of my oversized flats on the smooth church floors. I remember hearing the sound of flowing water in the Baptism quarter, where I’d find Dad waiting for me. I remember my friends. I remember the sound of children laughing. I remember the sound of teenage girls laughing, and feeling anxious when it got too close. I remember the soft thud of my head hitting the pillow when I arrived home from school every evening. I remember family dinners. I remember the sound of frying oil and the smell of coconut. I remember the sound of Sunday football and seeing Dad fall asleep on the couch after only five minutes of being there. I remember Ma laughing from the kitchen. I remember the sound of Ma’s hair dryer. I remember the singe of the hot comb the night before Easter Sunday. The Blue Magic, the Pink hair spray, the olive oil, Palmer’s hair food.
I remember our home. I remember feeling pretty and taken care of and the ache of wanting to feel that way again.
This post felt so nostalgic and good to read. I can relate to it so much because I often reminisce about my random childhood memories and sometimes wish I could go back and experience it just one more time. I like the way you made the experience of being a child feel so comforting because you had your family and home and was always taken care of because that’s a feeling that so many people deal with. We’re adults now and life hits hard sometimes especially when you have to deal with it on your own.
There’s so many lines I really enjoyed throughout this whole thing but I think my favorite was the ending line, “I remember our home. I remember feeling pretty and taken care of and the ache of wanting to feel that way again.” When we were little, the world was just happier in our eyes and I like that you described wanting to feel that way as an “ache” because it’s a real emotion that so many people feel in a mental, physical, and even spiritual way. It’s like a longing for something you didn’t even know you needed until it was already gone.
I also like how you repeated the lines, “I remember the sound of Ma’s hair dryer. I remember the singe of the hot comb the night before Easter Sunday. The Blue Magic, the Pink hair spray, the olive oil, Palmer’s hair food.” It makes me feel like you often just revisit these memories repeatedly which emphasizes the importance of them. The small details of you describing everything in the text was also so cool because it really helped me envision everything you were saying and really brought your memories to life.
I enjoyed feeling a glimpse of your youth and I hope you can make even more wonderful memories that are just as good as your childhood 🙂
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Aw thank you so much Jennah! I hope we can both make more wonderful memories ❤
from Zoe
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Faizan- I chose this blog because I myself am a very nostalgic person I love having memories with family friends and anyone that I’ve interacted with because it’s all the past and I will always remember a quote that resonates with me “I wish there was a way to know your in the good days before it’s over” and that’s why I connect with this post so much is because she is reminiscing about the home that once used be what she loved and in a way we can all relate to that as we grow up our relationship changes with our parents and those memories we had as kids were so precious but we never realized it. The sentence that stuck out to me was whenever she said I Remember followed up a core memory of her sibling doing something it’s like engraved in her brain but she knows she can’t get that time back and I always love nostalgia I think it’s beautiful and sad in many ways.
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I also really love the line i remember our home because a lot of the times you move out and you have a new place but it still doesn’t have that same feeling that you had once with your family sitting around a dinner table or knowing the ins and outs of your home and I think that’s really special to know when we’re young we take these things for granted we don’t look really look at the happy and close moments we had with our family members until it’s gone but we do miss and yearn for what was in a home was as young people.
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Nostalgia is beautiful and sad – that’s the perfect way to describe it! And that’s exactly how it feels to reminisce~
I’m so happy you were able to connect with my piece! ❤
from Zoe
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Thank you for reading!
Reading that you experienced similar things makes me happy! I think reading things that we can relate to is such a blessing ❤
I’m glad you were able to connect with my piece~
from Zoe
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